Of white rabbits, well, I have chased one or two.
As for filthy, flirty frogs, true – I’ve kissed a few.
Now I jump with both feet, the world fades from view.
I’m falling – falling further in love with you.
Deeper, deeper, descending, down into this hole.
Falling faster, faster, for love knows no control.
Catching cliches as I go: “Two parts of one soul!
Broken before but with you finally feel whole!”
Leave logic lingering above, love steps up to bat.
This is what true love feels like – well, fancy that!
Falling can’t stop grinning, look like a Cheshire Cat.
It’s mad, I tell you – now where did I leave my hat?
Falling further, faster still, love made me a leaper.
See gran gliding past me, yells: “This one’s a keeper!”
“Gran, good to see you! Thought you’d met the Reaper?”
No reply, just the hole & I, love growing deeper.
Finally after falling forever, find feet & land.
Sun a glistening golden globe, the floor shifting sand.
You are there with me, you smile & take my hand.
I’ll always love you, though they’ll never understand.
You say you love me too & I know you say it true.
Lead & I’ll follow, through a Wonderland made for two.
Copyright © 2016 Philip Craddock. All rights reserved.
Now that’s a loving rabbit hole to climb into.
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Thank you. 🙂 Phoebe’s a big Alice in Wonderland fan, so hopefully she’ll appreciate this poem when she reads it.
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I came over from Jackie’s blog. Your writing is superb.
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Thank you. Means a lot. 🙂
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😉
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This is beautifully written.
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Thank you. 🙂
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I found your blog through Jacqueline’s Meet & Greet party…. Wow! A great example of why people should do more of these mix ups. I love your poem 🙂
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Aw, thank you. 🙂 I’m incredibly shy, so wasn’t sure whether to post. Glad I did.
If you like any more of my poems (as you liked this one I recommend “Running Man” or “Sleeping Beauty & M.E” from my chart) then I’d really appreciate if you Followed my site. Thanks again.
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Thanks for the recommendations, I’ll make sure to have a look around 🙂
I already hit the “Follow” button… I hope we’ll see you in the Cove someday too 😉
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Hi Philip, I found you at Jacqueline’s blog party. I love the whimsy and the love in this poem!
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What a fantastic poem! 🙂
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Thank you. 🙂 Hopefully my fiancée will like it when she’s feeling well enough to read it (going through a bad patch with her M.E recently).
I hope you like some of the other poems on my site. Rather than just reading the most recent, I recommend checking out the pieces in the “Top Ten” chart on my home page, such as “Sleeping Beauty & M.E”.
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I hope your fiancée is feeling better soon. Thank you for the recommendation btw. I’ll have to check it out. 🙂
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Glad to make your acquaintance Philip. Love the poem and love the way you rhyme ( which I confess I am very poor at).
here is a shortlink to a poem I wrote a few minutes back : http://wp.me/p73yZZ-2vM
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Awww! :’)
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Pleased you liked it so much. 🙂 Hope you don’t mind me asking but any chance you’d mind sharing it on your site someday? I’d be happy to share any of your new pieces on my site too.
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I loved that you put your gran in your poetry. Great poem.
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Thank you for your comment. Thankfully capable of writing happy poems nowadays.
If you like enough of my pieces to warrant doing so, I’d appreciate it if you Followed my site. The Top 10 chart is a good place to start & as well as poetry, one of my short stories is on there that you may like: “Beauty Fades From the Train”.
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Already pressed the follow button Philip!
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Reblogged this on A Call for Mercy.
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Thank you for the reblog – really appreciate it. 🙂 Unexpected.
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I love the happy, madcap rhythm of this falling into the hole of loving someone unreservedly…..can feel the thrill, the excitement and the dizzying breathlessness of it all 🙂
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Thank you for your feedback. Hopefully my fiancée will like it just as much. Still waiting for her to read it. Phoebe has M.E (see “Sleeping Beauty & M.E” & “In the Darkened Room” on my site) & is going through a rough patch with it recently. Something nice for her to read when she feels able to anyway. 🙂
If you haven’t already done so, I’d really appreciate it if you Followed my site. Perhaps Sleeping Beauty & M.E (https://philipcraddockwriter.wordpress.com/2015/09/14/sleeping-beauty-m-e/) or In the Darkened Room (https://philipcraddockwriter.wordpress.com/2016/10/28/in-the-darkened-room/?wref=tp) could be the test as to whether it’s worth a Follow? If you’ve already Followed, thank you for doing so.
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Hi,
I tried the links but they did not work?
I planned to come back and read some more anyway, so I will just do that 🙂
Ann
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Hmm…unsure why they’re not working for you. You can find those pieces via the “Top Posts & Pages” chart, to the right on my site. I’m pleased that you already planned on reading some more of my pieces. Thank you. 🙂 The chart’s probably a good place to start when you do.
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I might have to get off phone and use laptop tomorrow
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Ah. Yes, mobile phones can be a touch random! Thanks for your feedback about the links. They ‘re showing as links on my laptop. Going to try logging out of my Word Press account though in case that’s a factor as to why they’re working for me.
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They did not show as a hyper link or whatever you call the blue links and did not work as copy/paste in browser
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Oh, they showed up in this part as hyperlinks and took me there….just not in my WordPress notifications.
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The plot thickens! 😉 Pleased that they worked eventually. To be honest, I’ve not tried using links straight from Notifications before.
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Glad I got to see the posts.
Will be back. You will be in my reader.
G’night!
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Good night. Sweet dreams. 🙂
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